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"Drape the room in shades of grey
Over pastel greens they are running
Like the ours of the day,
Seemingly they run to nothing
Burn the midnight oil,
Turn the lights down to a whisper
Feeling so afraid
I'm scared of what I'll do ,
With clouded thoughts of angered spite..in me.
I'm tired it's over, over!
My hands have been in chains
My thoughts are sour than death
And once you feel the same you'll understand
The walls are caving in.
To crush the state I’m in.
So sew the lies inside,and leave.
..it all behind.
Disappear from sight, to make all things right .
So turn back all the clocks and set your sight
Tell me do your wrists feel right?
The twilights throwing pounding rain,
With blood mixed in your pain,
Once they heal you won't feel the same
Defeated hearts always, will end up in flames"
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Model & Photographer & Editor: Me
Full view pls! Damn it... I'm still having lots of problems. My PC soon will be in my moms room again, and half of it I'll use for my personal one... which I'll assemble after I'll buy the missing components. Until then... I'll try being in touch here... hope you don't hate me, I promise I'll reply to you all !
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Image size
4304x5739px 10.64 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot A470
Shutter Speed
1/101 second
Aperture
F/9.0
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
Sep 30, 2009, 2:14:18 PM
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Overall Vision Originality
Technique ImpactThis is a well composed photo. I really like it. The use of monochrome/greyscale was a perfect choice.
There is very little I can see that I would change.
First, the lighting is good but the whites on her left arm are too white, to me, and are burnt out, losing the detail.
I would have given just a bit more space at the top of her head. With it so close, I find my eyes being drawn to see if it was cut off.. this is not where I would like my eyes to focus.
Lastly, her right arm is just barely cropped off. In my opinion, it should have all been included or cut more drastically. With just a small bit cropped, it appears more accidental than intentional.
This has a great focus, and without words, speaks loudly. Very dramatic. Awesome job!